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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2004-12-11 04:20 AM



i have to accept the fact that i'll never be "with you"
and live with it
cause you're like a forbidden fruit
like a virgin
too pure to touch
too pure for me
too good
i have to let go
of this feeling

love?

maybe, im not sure
but whatever it is
i'll never have it
and i have to accept this fact
and just deal with it...

i dunno, i just felt like writing, and this is what came from it, thought i'd get some responses, and ideas from others...

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stevebrklynnyc
Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292
GA, Camden
1 posted 2004-12-11 03:48 PM


too pure to touch
too pure for me
too good
i have to let go
of this feeling

Dont ever feel this way!  I am still learning myself, overall I enjoyed your post.  You describe how your feeling well.

silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-12-12 12:34 PM


that was great. awesome stuff! ive never read your before, but i regret that cuz they are great! i loved it

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

*Alli4000*
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since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
3 posted 2004-12-12 04:53 PM


I hardly ever venture into the dark forum, but I'm glad I did! With you not really knowing where this came from, I think this is great!

~alli~

Happy Holidays!

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