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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-11-21 02:47 AM

so many times
i wanted to hold you
hold you
touch you
love you
but you were not there for me
were not there right beside me
when i needed you most
and i need you now
like so many times before
i need you
now.

* short and stupid. but havent written in ages so trying to vent

your the only one keeping me alive

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2004-11-21 03:14 AM

hmm i like

umm not ur best but very cool. wish it was longer though!

love and empahy
darknes

PS sry reply is tres short but yeah can't think of anything else to say. hmm

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-21 06:54 PM

"but you were not there for me
were not there right beside me
when i needed you most"

Yeh, I know that feeling.

I've had writer's block too for awhile...atleast you were able to write something...lol.

~Alli~

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PainBaneChaos
Member

since 2003-10-17

Posts 150
The point of no return

3 posted 2004-11-21 09:17 PM

Eh, there are days when nothing seems to come out right, but soonly it'll go back to normal. Promise.

"World's use is cold, world's love is vain, world's cruelty is bitter bane; but is not the fruit of pain." Elizabeth Barrett Browning

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

4 posted 2004-11-22 12:49 PM

I think the idea could have been developed, but still, short was refreshing and honest.

Hollow.
Courtney.

Beautiful Lor.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

News_From_Nowhere
Member

since 2002-06-14

Posts 173
CU, NY

5 posted 2004-11-23 12:00 PM

Yes it was short, but not stupid.
Very real.
And the beauty is you could've stopped
at the very first line and had a
most beautiful poem...
"So many times"

Thanks for sharing!

Rider

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2004-12-12 04:05 AM

I Agree With NFN. It Was Real, And Beautifully Put, Honesty At It's Best

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