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Dark Poetry #4
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click1
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
0 posted 2004-10-28 08:32 PM

The minutes,will become
hours.

The hours, will become
days.

Four thousand nights, I loved
you.

Soon enough, I will forget your name.



Click
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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-10-29 12:18 PM

Omg, stunned. So short, yet envoked so much emotion. I love this, and I know how it is. Sigh, sigh, sigh. Great poem click.

Hollow.
Courts.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.
Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
2 posted 2004-10-29 09:26 AM

Felt this one! ~ Touche'
Good write, click

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere
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