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Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

0 posted 2004-10-08 03:54 PM

Love me till you hate me
hold me till i bleed
take away this pain,
that's deep inside of me

shake me till i scream
mourn me till i pass
take away these words
they're coming out to harsh

you are the absolute
the true and final word
that none can ever say
the things that must be heard

"I have a hard time keeping from drowning in this crazy buisness" - River Phoenix 1970-1993

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-10-08 10:42 PM

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

BEX! YOU ARE BACK!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

omg omg omg omg this was such an amazing comeback. this is brilliant. i love it.

the harsh words bit was sooooo magnificent!

YAY UR BACK! omg when i saw the name, seriously, i was like in pure shock. it was such a revelation. aaaahh im tres excited!

Cant wait!

LOR

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-10-09 01:17 AM

Ah ah ah. I only get this inspired with some poems. Yours is definately one of those! Wow, man, that was awesome. Great work. Hope you'll write more.

Hollow.
Courts.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-10-09 03:41 PM

"Love me till you hate me
hold me till i bleed
take away this pain,
that's deep inside of me"

My fav. part.

Awesome poem...Keep on posting!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-10-09 08:14 PM

awesome write. I loved it.

The begiining was the best.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

5 posted 2004-10-09 08:21 PM

yes and laura, twas I who pushed at her to get back into it.

my oh my

Love me till you hate me
hold me till i bleed
take away this pain,
that's deep inside of me

dudette this is me, spoken through your words. i felt this one

wow so great to have ya back chica, and better than eva

love and empathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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