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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-09-23 01:01 PM



I used to watch from afar
See all the garbage and hateful things
It wasn't me

Father confused
Sent down fake divinatory predictions
Nothing of me

Filth left my hand and my heart
I poisioned with lies
That came from me

I admit I'm guilty
Through their spoiled rage
It isn't me

The best of what we had
A servant for your delight
Remembered me

Everything of hate was done
And called fair
Hatred from me

I wanted to hurt you
Forced to watch from afar
Stood against me

Much too precious for us
I work while you play
Anger to me

Now you're trapped by your stupidity
And you turn it again
Envying me

I don't care about your personal feelings
If you hate me then do so; only while you,
Look up at me

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
1 posted 2004-09-23 08:34 PM


hey this sounds pretty angery...(duh) sorry I guess I will have to come back and read this again when I'm not half asleep, lol. ttyl

    - Sleepy Bon

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

CrEaTuRe
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since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
2 posted 2004-09-23 09:00 PM


Able to feel the vibe right of the wall with the feelings.... It reminds me of someone i once knew but like you  work my friend


ViNa

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2004-09-24 01:29 AM


Thank you both.  Its not entirely angry.  Towards the last line it starts to get better.  lol.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time.  -Ecclesiastes 3:11

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