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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-09-23 02:47 AM

Running out of words to say,
Feeling like I was born just yesterday,
Or was it only that I woke up today,
My head forms a memory but the picture is blurred,
My stomach tightens
It all comes back.
I wish this were a nightmare
That I could leave in my sleep,
But it appears this is my life,
And I’ve come back from a dream.
And I know I’m doing this for attention.

I’m making up these feelings,
Imagining something’s wrong.
Sick and tired,
Of being sick and tired.
Sick and tired,
Of wanted to be sick and tired.
If only something was wrong.
My face screams look-at-me
Look-at-me, now, look-at-me,
All I guess I want is some controversy,
Give me a reason,
To be like this;
To be unhappy.

I don’t even think I’m sad,
I think I wish I was,
And I think I am now because I thought that.
So confused,
And I know I’m doing this for attention.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2004-09-23 02:52 AM

hmm i like it

not sure bot the theme........ but if it made you fgeel betta then thats all that matters right.

well worded

loveandempathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

2 posted 2004-09-24 02:00 AM

i liked it..i know i have felt some of those feelings at different times in my life. good write.
kirsty.

"Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2004-09-24 07:38 PM

i like how you have written this... although some parts are a bit confusing but thats how its supposed to be rite?? nice way of putting these emotions and keep writing
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

brezee
Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 140

4 posted 2004-09-24 11:15 PM

YEA! what you said! haha i like this...it's like you read my mind...i've sorta thought about this lately...awesome job

~*brezee*~

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