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Dark Poetry #4

Tempting Fate

PainBaneChaos
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since 2003-10-17

Posts 150
The point of no return

0 posted 2004-08-23 07:24 PM

Firting at the very edge
of a knife too sharp.
Walking to the blade's tip and back again.
Trying every heroic act put forth,
earning a brave reputation.
Putting myself always in Harm's way,
but to no avail.
I give Fate very chace
to claim my tortured soul.
It seems even Fate has shunned me.

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

1 posted 2004-08-24 07:59 AM

i know this all to well....
nice write and the feelings have been well put...
kep ths up...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

2 posted 2004-08-27 01:57 PM

i too have tempted fate and been shunned by her. it seems that i am to far gone for even fate to take away this pain. too far gone to be noticed in my pain

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

PainBaneChaos
Member

since 2003-10-17

Posts 150
The point of no return

3 posted 2004-08-28 11:16 AM

That's what I was getting at.

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

4 posted 2004-08-28 12:43 PM

yeah i know. i know alot of things. and its not because i'm a stalker it is because i have been through hell ten times over and i still am going through hell. never ending cycly for me.

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

5 posted 2004-08-28 02:19 PM

i have also tempted fate, and it has also been very temted to take me, but in the end it didnt, something which i thank god for every day.

This was an amazing poem. I really liked it.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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