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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Goosebumps tingle up my arm, race to see who gets there first. It seems my very soul is frozen, my body an icy husk. My hackles are raised, a growl lurking in my throat, aching and yearning to be released. A snarl is hidden on my lips, impatiently biding its time. That old intensity waits in my breast, churning and frothing at the mouth. And all I can think, over and over, running through my head, is WHY? [This message has been edited by PainBaneChaos (08-18-2004 11:42 AM).] |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
wow...nice write, i've read your other poetry but i'm not quite sure what to say really lol but i like the imagery and how you put so much feeling into your writes and you can feel it...again, great job and keep it up! ~*brezee*~ |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Thanks. Don't you hate it how there's this poem that someone wrote, and you really love it and can think of nothing to say to it? At this point I don't bother to sensor my replying stupidity. So long as I get the message across and the writer has a sense of humor, it's all well and good. |
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