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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2004-08-16 07:37 PM



FCC
Its only lotion
What  a sick sincere way to show devotion
Your cronies announce your arrival
on a ledge with their bullhorn alive
pulling your hair out
So we wont have too
Such  a polite  way to say your afraid
Further proof that imagination is not worth the risk
The grand high prince of distress and his little bitter son Are busy milking wars
attacking voice and reason because its so unsound
This family portrait  of  God talks to me, and Bring them on
  makes us wish you were as Mute as a bible with far fewer words,
Force feeding lice to  your vultures,
  Supplying the habit of  addicts
   but We all know a burning Bush when we see one

New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire

© Copyright 2004 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2004-08-18 07:27 PM


"Further proof that imagination is not worth the risk"
Good, oh so good this is.
Why no one has responded, I do not know.
I see few writings which fully impress me, this did.
excellently protrayed.
I can taste the frusteration.

PainBaneChaos
Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return
2 posted 2004-08-18 10:02 PM


It's because we mere mortals couldn't think of anything intelligent to say through the awe.  ^_^ *would take the time to note that this comment is without the typical sarcastic smart-assness.*
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