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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-06-02 04:01 AM



Shadow propped up on the wall,
Dancing to music from the rain,
With a language that has no words,
A manikin posing in a statute,
Cemented into the ground,
Stiff from the time of solitude,
So, so tired.

Stricken leaves listening,
To the coo of the river brook,
Above the moonlight breaks,
Pressured by the advancing dawn,
It’s ashen complexion,
Painted on,
So, so tired.

Palm’s weathered from touch,
Touch, or, never letting go,
Eyes crinkled at the edge,
From living on the edge,
Or, jumping off,
Eyelid’s seemingly sewn together,
For they never open,
So, so tired.

Author's Note: Tell me what ya think!
Hollow

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-06-03 12:59 PM


I liked this one better than the shorter versoin. Much more... i dunno. This one just cuaght my attention more. Very amazing write.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
2 posted 2004-06-03 02:11 AM


love it more each time i read it

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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