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lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

0 posted 2004-05-03 12:14 PM

I'm as sharp as the razor glistening in the moonlight
I'm as dark as the blood pumping through your veins
I am your worst nightmare

I’m as cold as your hands right after you’ve been drained
As pale as your face, almost lifeless
I am your best friend

I’m as dead as your black heart
As alive as the pain inside you
I am your dark secret

I rip you apart from the inside
I eat away at your soul
I am your desire

I control you
I am your pain
I am your fear

I’ve locked your heart away
Never to be seen or felt again
No one can melt your frozen exterior

I’m as frightening as the scars that plague your flesh
I’m as deceptive as the lies you tell
I am your forbidden love

[This message has been edited by Nan (05-05-2004 07:41 AM).]

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-05-06 03:37 AM

omg i really loved it

amazing and dark and woah i love ur hair!

i was looking at u while i read it and i could almost see you mouthing the words...veyr dark image uve created there...i love it

keep it up

LOR

"It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pe is his/her pants - Brandon B

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-05-06 05:26 PM

Holy....wow. This was amazing!

I absolutely loved it!!! I havent read something that good in awhile!

Then again i havent been on here in FOREVER!
lol

II will definetely be looking for more of you stuff!

kissa_bear

Oh, by the way.. I love the blue hair. ~lol~

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 75
Boise Idaho

3 posted 2004-05-06 08:42 PM

wow this is an amazing poem very well written... and exquistely done. wonderful job

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lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

4 posted 2004-05-06 11:26 PM

thanks a lot. wish it had the original first lines, but rules are rules. *blah* anyways, keep a look out for more.

Theory
Junior Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 23
N. CA. USA

5 posted 2004-05-17 02:35 PM

nice, dark. I like your style. keep it up

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