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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Does the edge ever grow cold, held in fire? "eyes twitch. retain. a sentimental something." a/SP |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
oh...my mind says otherwise...to the meaning of this. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Great thought provoking write, Mike! My answer would be: "No, but it tempers from the need." coyote  "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
ummmm......i guess not fire is always hot right? This is too deep for me my brain hurts. Joe "The worst vice is advice" (Al Pacino, devil's advocate) |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
its like what I told the old capitan...the colder things burn deeper. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
hm, does it? thx, my nind needed a move between glasses of wine |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hmmm...thinking...I like that...grin Thank you...  When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (10-04-2003 02:34 AM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
sometimes the cold and the hot feel the same... and it alltogether stings stronger Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
depends where the edge is held... *too early to think like that* Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
somtimes the brightest fire cannot warm the implaccable... this poem makes me feel bad about myself. great write, mikey. through the ravages of sleeplessness lies the comfort of the night |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
im with midnightson, this poem makes me feel horrible, terrible, and all of the above. but this has to be the shortest best poem i've ever read. |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
Rather amazing how so few words can draw you in and capture your full attention. Very well done! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad I can make everyone feel like jumping off a building in so few words. It's been a hectic few months.Thanks for readin'. I appreciate it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God, it sure can Mikey I have missed your writing horribly |
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