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darkness_witch
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0 posted 2004-03-24 01:06 AM


The corrosive stare of the snake
crawls through my mind
as the night whispers for me to stay

The hollow eyes of the looming trees
linger on my body for a second too long
as my grave begs me too return

Vulgarity removed from signature - Ron

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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
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1 posted 2004-03-24 05:26 PM


Like i said a few days ago, this is......wow, its dark.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-03-24 06:08 PM


I agree, very...very dark. I like this a lot. Awesome write chick.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

darkness_witch
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3 posted 2004-03-25 12:16 PM


thnx guys for ur reply.

havent been here for ages.

but yea thnx

i need somebody and always this sick strange darkness comes creeping on so haunting every time

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
4 posted 2004-09-04 04:02 AM


woooah cannot believe i missed this one!
DUDE! WAT THE HELL??? WHERE THE HELL HAVE I BEEN?
this is bloody amazing... i cant even begin to explain

im going through all your old ones and i seriously do not recall this one. wow.

i am once again utterly shocked and overwhelmed and jealous and proud and amazed at your work. growl, roar, hiss.

god i miss you mate.

LOVED IT SO MUCH

LOR

say wat you will, say what you mean, but you could never offend cuz your dirty words come out clean

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
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5 posted 2004-09-04 04:54 AM


woah cant even remember writing this.

thanx lor

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
6 posted 2004-09-07 02:27 PM


This is dark beauty . . .
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