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INSANE RIDE
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INSANE RIDE |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
LIFE'S AN INSANE RIDE, WHEN POWERED BY PAIN, KEPT INSIDE. HIDDEN FROM ALL TO SEE, DOOMED TO HELL, FOR ETERNITY. SEARCHING FOR A WAY OUT, WHAT IS LIKE, REALLY ABOUT/ WHAT HAPPENS WHEN LOVE DOESN'T WIN, THE HEART BREAKS, PAIN MOVES IN. YOUR BODY SCREAMS, "NO MORE" KEEP ALL OUT, LOCK THE DOOR. NOW IT'S TIME FOR THE RIDE TO BEGIN, AN INSANE RIDE, TO HELL, AND BACK AGAIN! |
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Vagabond Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163 |
this has a rythme to it |
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unwantedspork Junior Member
since 2004-02-02
Posts 24 |
I agree, it flows really smoothly. Unlike mine, but it was so good! I enjoyed reading this! |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
yeah but what if i dont want to open the door again. what if i cant? lost and afraid i am calling out to you light angel. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
i realy loved this, and thought it was quite funny. The ending was great. The rhyming and flow was also very good, and didnt sound forced at all. amazing write. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Sorry, i forgot to save for my library. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You have described life and love most accurately . . . (next time try lower case, k?, it makes the write easier to read and sends a clearer message) "The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye . . . the story of love is hello and goodbye. Until we meet again." - James Marshall Hendrix |
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