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Dark Poetry #4

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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-02-24 10:40 PM

Evaporated soul,
No place to go,
She knows,
Then the confusion sets in,

Relic of forgotten times,
Remorseful eyes,
She knows,
Then the numbness evolves,

Wandering thoughts,
Expressionless terror,
She knows,
Then the anguish emerges,

Weary of the burden,
Possessing black,
She knows,
Then the darkness shelters,

Poisoned opinion,
Infected mind,
She knows,
Then she realizes,

She never knew,
Only assumed,
Only accused,
If only she knew.

However long the night, the dawn will break.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-02-25 05:04 PM

"Poisoned opinion,
Infected mind,
She knows,
Then she realizes,
She never knew,
Only assumed,
Only accused,
If only she knew."

This part wuz awesome~the ending i mean. Very kool twist thang goin on. ~lol~

!VaMpIrE KiSsEs!

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2004-02-26 01:56 AM

Evaporated soul,
No place to go,
She knows,
Then the confusion sets in,
Relic of forgotten times,
Remorseful eyes,
She knows,
Then the numbness evolves,

LOVED IT

THIS ONE ROCKS

OMG IT ROCKS SO HARDCORE I CANT BELEVE IT

AHHH I LOVED IT

KEEP ROCKIN N ROLLIN

darkness

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

Vagabond
Member

since 2004-01-23

Posts 163

3 posted 2004-02-26 08:18 AM

She never knew,
Only assumed,
Only accused,
If only she knew
If only she knew...

Vagabon the Lost One

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

4 posted 2004-02-26 03:04 PM

i liked.

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

5 posted 2004-02-26 07:53 PM

if only I knew...hehe awesome

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