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Xonicx
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since 2004-01-14
Posts 20
Vancouver, WA

0 posted 2004-01-15 11:50 AM


Note: This poem is not encouraging suicide in any shape, way, or form. I am not suicidial and I am a very happy person, this is just a way to express emotions needed to be vented.

I walk into the room of death
With one short breath
The lights darken into a gloom
Firey red flares fill my room
My skin begins to melt
And that feeling that I felt
Strong, painful, bliss
Kiss of death is my wish
Memories of and good times flood my mind
Twisting, and confusing me into a bind
Before I could reach for the door
I fell to the floor
While my eye reflected the fiery hell around
I laid thinking on the ground
Nothing really is what it seems
Reality is only within our dreams
Wishing for a new life
Is almost committing suicide with a double-edge knife
Kind of messed up if you ask me
Out on the streets you will be
Eatin’ through the trash
Because you used the last of your money to get smashed
But screw that, back on topic, your dieing
You’re doing nothing there but lying
Waiting for your soul to part
You reflect on your heart
But it’s already burnt to a crisp
I died 17 years ago, that was my death wish
All these years I wanted to die
All I ever needed: was to part and fly,
Screw the World and say buh-bye;
But now I realize it all just was a lie
But to late now I already died.


© Copyright 2004 Benjamin Allen Chapin - All Rights Reserved
Gothika_07
Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61
new zealand
1 posted 2004-01-15 09:57 PM


That was excellent i seriously love the way u rhyme and the way ur wrds flow so well 2getha.

xxgothikaxx

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