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Dark Poetry #4

Consequence

desperado16
New Member

since 2003-12-27

Posts 7

0 posted 2003-12-27 01:49 AM

Promises unwound,
Merely a
Bare spool
Remains,

With handling,
Chips carved
Among the
Splinterizing center,

Faintly standing,
Until,
Two piercing
Blows
Shatter remnants,

Dagger-like slices
Soar
From one peak,
To the other,

The other,
Awaiting hurled
Blades,
Welcoming lacerations,

For it
Perceives,
The wrongs committed,
Inhumanity performed,
Damage caused.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-12-27 08:19 PM

Des16~
Welcome to Passions~
I hope we'll see more from you ... enjoy the poetry of others also~
We have so many talented poets here ... WELCOME~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Necro Draconis
Member

since 2000-05-19

Posts 115

2 posted 2003-12-31 03:38 PM

Keep it up! Nice!

We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late.

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