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finklstiltskin Junior Member
since 2003-12-26
Posts 15Down South, USA |
My heart begins to bleed As I watch you flaunt it You got what you wanted Where is what I need? I deserve this pain, I knew it would come Deserve it, can’t provide Deserve the tears I’ve cried You deserve a day in the sun I deserve to live free as me Free my body from the weight of my mind You repeat that I’m blind, but I’ll be fine The day you let me be ©1993 Fink L. Stiltskin Wrong in the Head That guy that told you honesty is the best policy is a big, fat liar. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
"Deserve it, can’t provide Deserve the tears I’ve cried" this is so brilliant! I like this write a lot, very kool, (sad) but i can identify. so groovy, have a gravy day, & by the way, welcome to pip! =) - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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finklstiltskin Junior Member
since 2003-12-26
Posts 15Down South, USA |
River, Thanks for enjoying my work. You can find more of my poetry at my website, Wrong in the Head . I believe that is the first time anyone has called anything I've touched 'brilliant.'  Thanks again, Fink That guy that told you honesty is the best policy is a big, fat liar. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Very nice poem, very nice indeed. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
lol, as a matter of fact, I just came from there, you've got a groovy site *adds some wallpaper* some good shtuff. =). later dude. - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Bravo! We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
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