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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-12-13 11:33 PM

Encircling you
in beams of moon,
your words haunt
of worlds parallel
resonating both
beauty and sorrow,
some thing a c h e s,
poetic passages surge
from depths of you,
perverse, as they are sensual,
you are blessed and tainted
as the chords of rain
that play light as mist
in air, then strike the part
of me that is dead,
as i  f e e l YOU
in a pounding beat, as the night
comes to crescendo,
midnight extinguishes
the glow off the moon's full face,
as i  h e a r YOU in chimes that speak
the soul of rain,
as you craft your words,
like an oracle chrisening dead white,
where you birth LIFE
and pierce inside me, D E E P
you are the extremes
called up from worlds within, that
created and still claim you,
as they stay, always
one beat beneath you,
You ARE the Beauty
of the Darkness,
noctural prince,
you are ringed by your path, that both
embraces and burdens,
i a w a k e n to your calling,
in the tempestous wind,
the relentless rain,
you are moving closer in,
i  f e e l YOU along
this soul that waits,
in hungered desire, to
b r e a t h e in
the rapture of YOU,
through the winter's trees,
now possessed,
by the hollow echoing within,
alongside me, as we stand
bound to earth's superficial gate,
in a wind raped field this night,
on scraped knees
we bleed of life and death
in sync, as they cry out
beside me, for release,
to be filled in again
with shades of you.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-13-2003 11:35 PM).]

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

1 posted 2004-01-01 10:48 AM

Wow...very thought provoking and long!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2004-01-05 08:56 AM

written like a true Goddess . . .

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

3 posted 2004-01-05 10:38 AM

Positively beautiful. it may be long but it's worth every word, every word invokes images beyond recall and it's really quite beautiful...sorry...I love this poem, I love the imagery and the pain and the joy and the taste of this poem. Okay, so i'm babbling? Oh well, i'm adding this one.

I only know myself...and even that I don't know well.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-01-05 12:46 PM

thanks bboy, my dear as always
and suzieQ, love u girlfriend, stay warm up
there
and teen, thanks, yes i know its long, so long i always wonder if i should not do that, but it just poured out

xaos
Junior Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 35

5 posted 2004-01-06 05:06 AM

Very powerful, it seems to move between being tragic and inevitable, I really like it

Shereen
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 57
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-01-06 10:55 AM

What can I say? Sometimes we need to let the words pour out - no matter where they land. All poets are bound by one thing - emotion - and you have tapped yours vividly. Very good.
Shereen.

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