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Soul Sepulchre
Junior Member

since 2003-10-19

Posts 29
Tennessee, USA

0 posted 2003-10-19 08:17 PM

Such a soul that wanders the nights, lost and free, afraid but careless.
Oh such a soul that wanders those dark alleys of the mind.
That crawls on blood stained knees through the endless sands of time.
Such a soul that wanders and stumbles.
Stumbles but never trips.
It finds its footing now lost however and must choose a different path.
Will it veer to the left and take the lit path?
Or shall it veer right and brave the midnight blue path that is so cleverly overlooked?
Either path it takes, it muses, shall have an outcome of greater or lesser value and worth than it had expected.
Never the less, it veers right, taking that path so shadowed by dark ambition and heretic desire.
Such a soul that wanders now on that twisting, winding path, never finding rest though always within shelter.
Such a soul that wanders now and is condemned by all that should set eye upon it.
It has veered onto the path less traveled.
It has broken away from the majority and decided its own fate.
It will take control and rule its own direction.
Such a soul that wanders the nights, lost and free, afraid but careless.
Such a soul that wanders those dark alleys of the mind.
That crawls on blood stained knees through the endless sands of time.
Such a soul that wanders and will NEVER cease.
Such a soul that is...you and I.

*Inque Monroe*
Junior Member

since 2003-10-18

Posts 43
No where special

1 posted 2003-10-19 08:29 PM

As always its dark and makes people wonder what is going through your head honey, I always liked this one, the ending on it is great. -poke- post your others..they are just as good and just as dark.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-10-19 08:50 PM

Dark, yes, but not without a spark of hope.

"It will take control and rule its own direction."

Enjoyed. Welcome to passions!

Check your e mail for a special greeting.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

3 posted 2003-10-20 05:22 AM

The images you portray are very descriptive.and you know what you want. Good luck to you, Maggie. Welcome

Asian Rain
Member

since 2003-10-11

Posts 73

4 posted 2003-10-20 07:58 AM

Welcome! Enjoyed the read and loved your line "dark alleys of the mind".

Asia

swow finix
Junior Member

since 2003-10-17

Posts 14
here but nowhere now

5 posted 2003-10-20 08:42 AM

soul sepulchre

thanx. this poem is simply amazing, it is an amazing peice of art. i think that you have it right, something i have been trying to do to a poem in a long time.

congrats.

~be who you want-belive what you want~
~love who you want~

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