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Response to Ringos " I Am" challenge
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Response to Ringos " I Am" challenge |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania 
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I AM I am faithful and strong I wonder where lifes roads go I hear angels tears, wet with grief I see dragons dancing in the air I am faithful and strong I pretend to handle all pain well I feel cupids arrow strike I touch the mane of the unicorn as I ride I worry I will hurt the ones I love I cry when I feel your pain I am faithful and strong I understand I deserve to have love I say nothing I can't believe I dream of silence in my mind I try to give more tham I recieve I hope never to lose you I am faithful and strong Thank you for the challenge Ringo,,,,,it took longer than I though it would,,,to be real,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I really like this...and Ringo is great, well done indead. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This was very well done. hugs. Cause in my dreams it's always there |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michelle, I really liked this challenge. We did it before, and it was fun. I think that I might do it again.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very well done |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Challenge well met indeed. Enjoyed. Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done..many of the "I AM" challenge poems are in the archives of poetry #27 M mine: /pip/Forum80/HTML/003400.html |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
thanks for the info naked, and thank you all for your kind words Michelle |
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