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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-12-29 11:20 AM




My Thoughts Will Be With You

Upon the midnight hour
As fireworks light the sky
We join in celebrations
To the old we say goodbye

Giving toast to the future
Where the new shall unfold
Lets take time to reflect
In saying farewell to the old  

Whilst ringing in the new
On the last day of December
Thoughts will be with you
Each friend I shall remember

The counting down begins
As this year comes to the end
I take this time to thank you
Heart to heart, friend to friend


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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-12-29 11:42 AM


very nice, Hope... I wish you all the best in the New Year to come

hugs
M

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever
2 posted 2003-12-29 11:55 AM


Thank you, Hope...

What a sweet holiday wish. I extend to you the same for a prosperous and joy-filled new year.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

HopeS
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3 posted 2003-12-29 12:19 PM


Thank you Maureen , in my wishes sincere
I hope you have a wonderful New Year

Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-12-29 12:21 PM


Thank you jacie , I hope you also have a wonderful New year

Hope

Ravenwolfvoyager
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5 posted 2003-12-29 03:48 PM


So well done, you make the new year worth looking forward to.Thank you for the share Hope.
wintertao
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6 posted 2003-12-29 03:49 PM


very nice !
LngJhnAg
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7 posted 2003-12-29 04:05 PM


Well done, Hope!  But you forgot some stuff, which I'll add in for you, as I'm sure you would have written yourself if you had had the time.

This is the time to not forget,
What 'Deer and Toe are like.
They're scalawags and rascals, yet,
They come across real nice.

They write their pretty phrases,
To tempt the maidens to all swoon.
But they're mercurial and abrasive,
And grow hair with the moon.

Only Long John is truly nice,
And can be trusted to be quiet.
So tell him of your deepest vice,
(And he'll find someone to buy it.)

You're welcome, Hope.
  

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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8 posted 2003-12-29 04:09 PM


And thank you for the lovely verse!  Happy New Year!
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