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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-12-29 01:48 AM



I am but a vapor, a mist
in your existence,

Only in your minds eye
do I appear,

I cannot escape your
poetic insistance,

For when you
breathe words,

Only then do I
hear...

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2003 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
lil' Angel
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1 posted 2003-12-29 01:51 AM


excellent poem


Lil' Angel



harash
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2 posted 2003-12-29 01:53 AM


You are..exactly you are.....a romantic Heart...a beautiful art in your poem...

Always Harash

A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2003-12-29 01:54 AM


Thank you angel!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2003-12-29 01:55 AM


Thank you Harash for thelovely comments

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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5 posted 2003-12-29 02:32 AM


ARH, yes you really are a Romantic Heart, and I love
the way you write your heart. It's beautiful, sweet lady.
Hugs,

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2003-12-29 02:40 AM


Thanks Ethel~ your just as sweet as apple pie!

hugs~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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7 posted 2003-12-29 02:41 AM


so short and simple yet so uterly moving...you diffenitly are a romantic at heart and my own hoplessly romantic heart hears you. Beautiful piece, well written and put together and just all around lovely.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2003-12-29 02:48 AM


Thank you beautiful..gosh I just don't know what to say....I am moved by your kind words...

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

ambrish
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9 posted 2003-12-29 03:41 AM


For when you
breathe words,

Only then do I
hear...

         so beautiful.

A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 2003-12-29 03:52 AM


Thank you Ambrish for noticing my words and my heart

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Suetang
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11 posted 2003-12-29 07:20 AM


Beautiful words from the most romantic of hearts.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Goldenrose
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12 posted 2003-12-29 07:28 AM


From one Romantic to another~
h


''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (12-29-2003 07:30 AM).]

A Romantic Heart
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13 posted 2003-12-29 07:37 AM


Thank you Sue~ Romantic poets know each other, for they have a one track mind...love is all they can write about.....From one Romantic poet to another great romantic writer.

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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14 posted 2003-12-29 07:38 AM


Goldenrose~ Thank you!
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Ericc
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15 posted 2003-12-29 08:19 AM


Beautiful!

Eric

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Gaia
16 posted 2003-12-29 09:04 AM


up into the blue with you
very very nice!

Ravenwolfvoyager
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17 posted 2003-12-29 03:55 PM


What a beautiful write. Love is as eternal as your words. Thank you for sharing.
iliana
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18 posted 2003-12-29 04:06 PM


Oh, yes!  What a Romatic Heart are you!  Really liked this!   lol.........jo
LngJhnAg
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19 posted 2003-12-29 04:09 PM


This is very romantic.  Of course, if you were writing this for Toe, you'd have to love the smell of stale beer.  heh
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