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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-12-23 07:33 AM


Of Moths

A worthy moth inspects my lair
In hopes to find a flame to share
But powder from her frothy wings
Has frit the walls with glowing things

Iridescence never seen
Hanging gardens there to glean
Echoes lit like fireflies
Twinkle like the midnight skies

She never lit a candles light
But all the night has turned to bright
And now this egos caverns dark
Whispers like a meadowlark

How is substance made of dust?
Effervesce to carbon trust
Spill to waterfalls of drive
And make the dead feel so alive

She woke my Randy dragon’s rill
And so the fire of his will.



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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-12-23 08:01 AM


Just a moth …. and it inspired you so beautifully! Your words too are iridescent.
Love and light. Margherita

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-12-23 08:33 AM


God bless you both, may your hearts be filled with love throughout and beyond this holiday season...thank you for this splendid read...what a joy you are.
Luv Lee J.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-12-23 08:40 AM


How is substance made of dust?

~*~

Miracles, Sy...Miracles...


Aimster
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4 posted 2003-12-23 09:07 AM


sy,

a very beautiful and tender write...
i'm keeping this one for sure
happy holidays to you both!
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-12-23 09:24 AM


What a beautiful morning read awaited me today!
Lovely lovely dear Sy.
Time for a spot of special Christmas tea with me?
You sit tight..I'll pour.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...    

Sadelite
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6 posted 2003-12-23 09:33 AM


Sy,
  Your perception so refreshes me every time I stop your post.  I felt as if I were there.
And then, of course, you top it off with a little science and philosophy.  
You have it all it your pocket!!!

"How is substance made of dust?
Effervesce to carbon trust"
                 Sadelite

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7 posted 2003-12-23 10:09 AM


Seymour such wonderful words each morn. Don't know how you do it.....you are truly blessed with an awesome gift.
Cinnamon toast with another cup of tea?
hugs, Chris

thinktwice
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8 posted 2003-12-23 10:20 AM


wow. moving and very inspirational. loved it.


-Adam

"beauty is in the eye of the beholder"
   -Finger Eleven

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2003-12-23 10:38 AM


Of Dragons & Poets


Dragons come and dragons go ...
huff and puff to steal the show.
Snort and roar at the castle's gate ...
holding in store a moth in wait.

She saw through his smoke and fire ...
she knew he was destined to fly higher.
She had seen his heart worn on sleeve,
read his dreams in rhymed reprieve.

For he was a poet in dragon's disguise ...
as well as a prophet with an artist's eye.
By stroke of brush and gifted pen ...
his vision told of what was--would be again.

He spoke of truth, of right and wrong ...
wisdom wrapped in poetic song.
She could not deny his brilliant light ...
he lit up the night as his words took flight.

As he wrote his name across her heart and the satin sky ...
he painted this moth's wings the colors of butterflies.







Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-12-23 11:32 AM



A moth extraordinaire inspects your lair! ~ and as you well know, moths are attracted to the light! ~ yours, dear sonneteer!

Morning hugs to you both! &
EA


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-12-23 11:38 AM


Margherita
Thank you sweet.

LeeJ
You are a dear, thank you.

Sunshine
You guessed it. Hugs.

Amy,
Thank you love. Hugs

Nancy,
I'll drink, you wink.

Sadelite
Thank you so much.

Chris,
Cinnamon toast, yummy. Hugs

thinktwice,
Thank you for the read and reply.

JM,
A lovely, lovely poem. Miss ya Tink.
WWRS



Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-12-23 11:41 AM


Earth Angel
Ya know moths are close to angels.

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