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Solstice |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The night passes by and we fail to notice - The fullness of the moon, the crisp bite of winter air... Or the stillness that lies beneath the rush of crowds. There is still time. So I take your hand and we walk into the night. This is our present to each other...to ourselves - To the night. We sit...and unwrap it slowly. ~ Happy Solstice! The day is short...yet the night...the night is long. Love, Eric [This message has been edited by Ericc (12-20-2003 11:20 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh My Eric!!! This is perfectly beautiful!!! Another keeper for my 'Eric' file. Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
I'm still learning to write but my editor friend says I will be good if I keep working. I want to be as good as you and not need a friend to edit what I write. Kaz |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, I didn't see the up-side of it getting dark so early, but now I do. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yum. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful and may all your nights warm your heart like a fireplace on Christmas shared with loved ones! (big angel hugs) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Pure winter magic. You create such warmth in the frozen day; such light in the long night. Beautiful... enchanting... heartwarming. A wonderful way to celebrate the solstice. Thank you. I love you, Moca |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Let's hear it for long nights spent in this fashion! Once again, you succinctly remind us to look at the positive...you are simply remarkable. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Sweet one to read...the night gives the private times to be just two...  A kiss for you, and your love to share. Merry Christmas.  Terri~  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
What a comfortable poem. Sitting in the night as just the two of you. That sounds nice. GIS Application of knowledge is the basis of ability. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I adore this poem of yours for the atmosphere it creates, soft and warm and for the memories it evokes. A touch of hands can be all we need to make the night sparkle in our hearts. So I take your hand and we walk into the night. This is our present to each other...to ourselves - To the night.  Winter solstice ... there is still time ... I love you. Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly written Eric. Yes, it is that time, isn't it? Thanx for reminding and painting such a pleasurable picture. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
oh yeahhhhh, the night! And this is IT! Beautiful, as usual, Eric. ~K~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A wonderful read... and with such undertones of enjoyment! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love it! ~ on several levels!  Warm holiday hugs & blessings, Linda |
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