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Too Many Remembers |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Moisturizing Memories ~*Marge Tindal*~ One tiny teardrop looking for a place to fall Seeking a cheek to caress in total recall~ And should it trickle past a smile you left for me to reclaim You are a memory I won't soon forget Knowing that though you are gone, always you will remain~ One droplet of sweet remember, moisturizing your memory Bringing you back to dwell within the very heart of me~ Tears and smiles are all I have in this soul of kindred keeping All you were and all I am are shed within this weeping~ And though I shed each of you in a different sweep of time's command Cumulatively I remember when you each held my hand~ Someday the smiles will outnumber the tears but, until they do God knows that I was blessed to be touched by each of you~ ~*~ Grandma Wainright~How many times you come to play in my heart~ Daddy~Here too short ... gone too long~ Granddaddy~ Your memory is as tall as the cast of your shadow~ Brother Mike~Oh, Mike ... most of all, most of all~ Michelle Lynette Barr~ Angel child of my heart .. a blessing you were to me~ Little Granny~Tightly held with squeezing heart-hugs~ Hilda Isaly~ Nanny ... you left so many smiles~ Mother~Fragrance of rose or a butterfly in flutter .. brings you back to me~ Aunt Mimi~ Oh, my ... how precious the smiles of remember~ Joseph R. Pearce~More than teacher .. you gave me reason to believe in myself~ Sister Shari~Too short the wick ... but, oh how you glowed~ ~*~ Flipping through this Rolodex of December-In-Remember I thank God for the beauty of each etching on my heart. Believing that, far beyond time, they share in the true of who I am, gives me reason to be thankful for the gift of remember~ *December 2003* A gentle December-In-Remember ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, This is an excellent write.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You bring back my own calendar of remembers, of tears that still sometimes fall.....of a soft sigh as a moment comes to mind, a touch is felt inside...I have my own list that grows slowly...until one day I will be a part of another one....held tenderly by my children.... Thanx for the beauty of this Marge... |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Well woven personification of a simple teardrop. Fallen in sadness, yes, but also with a modicum of joy, as each memory remembered recalls the ripples still spreading from their rock tossed in the waters of Creation. And yes, there will be a time when the smiles outnumber the tears, though that may not be on this mortal coil. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Glad I caught this beauty Marge. I've been away last week, painting, painting and painting my daughter's new apartment, LOL I came back all blue and white  Lovely verse you wrote here. Love you dear friend, hope all is well Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What a beautiful tribute to all those who have touched our lives. Beautiful. Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Tears and smiles are all I have in this soul of kindred keeping All you were and all I am are shed within this weeping~ How I understand... how beautifully you've written your tears. *S* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
how beautifully to rmember them at this time |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such beautiful, heartfelt, sweet remembrance! They hear and KNOW! Love and light. Margherita |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
marge...you know how to wrinkle my heart don't you?...love you...helen |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A lovely and touching rememberance, dear Marge. Hope this holiday season finds you smiling, too! Corinne |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing your memories with us...Paul A memory...a face A thought....a place A time........of remember A month.....of December Remember each face and place of December "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (12-21-2003 06:11 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Mama Marge, you know this touches me deeply |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Tenderly Marge...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wonderfuly done! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks to each of you for your tender messages~ Each remember brings a tear ... yet each tear brings some joy in knowing that they have all gone to a far greater place in His gather of angels~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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