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"Find Me Here"
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"Find Me Here" |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Find me here in walls that hold no tears Hear my voice where there are no fears Be my guide perhaps my bride In this place of new beginings Find me here Something new Something "borrowed" Something blue A voice rings true for you Begin anew where there is you Where rings can be exchanged and hearts rearranged Find me here Draw me near Marriage can be written in these shades of blue |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A love quest flows through these words that give a map of where to find you....Wonderful writing... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Like the words but I think "I" is someone else in your writing, you are writing and the writer you dont believe is really you. Maybe I have it wrong. Dave |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
That is great. To the point. I can tell where you are going with it. It has a message. Thanks for the read |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well written! jwesley |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
ah yea... good stuff here  hope you can live it like you write! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears. [This message has been edited by GG (01-02-2004 06:31 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, it sure can good write |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kenneth~ Oh WOW ... this is tenderly lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
Great Read...thank you for sharing |
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