With each breath our future reveals

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Open Poetry #30

With each breath our future reveals

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-12-19 03:39 PM

I do not know our destiny
but long for eyes to make me see
the diamonds within our hearts
so I can read our love on chart

I know what happened in our past
and all the spells by our hearts cast
From first day on we formed a chain
we were the best of all champagne

Yet recently the bubbles left
But what did cause this loss, this theft?
It may have been the choice of fate
to point us to a new soul mate

Is this the truth, our tale will end?
the death of all the time we spend
Or would our hearts preserve their tie
so we can dance on clouds up high

Whatever luck our lives will face
It shall bring us a better place
Our hearts' desire will once come true
With who or how? I wish I knew...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-12-19 04:31 PM

I fully understand this poem. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-12-19 05:05 PM

How sweet...if only we knew the answers.
Terri~

Merry Christmas

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

Steve Motuel
Member

since 2003-12-19

Posts 72
Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany

3 posted 2003-12-19 05:10 PM

A sad yet endearing poem...

"And then there was nothing, only me and my thoughts..."

Steve

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-12-19 07:21 PM

Well done.
Welcome to Passions.
ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-12-19 07:25 PM

Very nicely penned....and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2003-12-20 05:14 PM

Love is the journey of our lifetime -- happy journey. Good write.

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