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Kazeru
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0 posted 2003-12-20 11:13 AM



The rain trickles down like gentle tears
The wind caressing the leaves
Like lover's would kiss
Eventhough dark clouds from
I don't fear the coming storm
I reach for your hand
Holding you close against me
Together we can weather all
That our path will bring
There is no force greater
Then the love in our hearts

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

© Copyright 2003 Jean-Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-12-20 01:27 PM


"Together we can weather all
That our path will bring
There is no force greater
Then the love in our hearts"

Very very nice and much enjoyed!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...    

Kazm
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2 posted 2003-12-20 01:40 PM


I like your poem, and I like your name too. People are going to think we're related.

                                                 Kaz

zenny
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3 posted 2003-12-20 01:42 PM


When two hearts are joined by love,
they'll conquer everything.

lovely poem
Hugs, kelly

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-12-20 01:43 PM


very sweet...
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5 posted 2003-12-20 03:44 PM


I like this very much... "together" can weather storms that would crush a spirit alone. *S*
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-12-20 05:04 PM








(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, love can conquer and hope all things and I wish this for you to forever sing in your heart, yay! (big angel holiday hugs) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jean-Philippe, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2003-12-20 05:10 PM


Wonderful sentiment crowned for Christmas.
Happy Holidays.
TD

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8 posted 2003-12-20 05:18 PM


nice read
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