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Steve Motuel
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0 posted 2003-12-19 12:23 PM


As a hello from me to you all, I'd like to present a short poem from 1984.  It is supposed to inspire and make the reader yearn for more so go ahead and try to finish it.


Within the mists of time he came
a being whom we gave no name
his eyes ablaze with burning fire
the sweet warm flames of loves desire.

[This message has been edited by Steve Motuel (12-19-2003 05:03 PM).]

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-12-19 12:29 PM


Welcome Steve!  And a very lovely first tribute!

Susan

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2 posted 2003-12-19 12:32 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed this first post!
Actually...you could continue on from the end of this interesting piece.
Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-12-19 12:34 PM


hello, and welcome

A very pretty peaceful poem to start with, cannot wait to read more of yours.
Happy Holidays and have a glorious day

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4 posted 2003-12-19 12:36 PM


welcome, and hey..... it can't end there, you gotta keep going!!
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5 posted 2003-12-19 12:41 PM


Very nice entrance Steve.  Welcome to Passions and happy holidays.
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6 posted 2003-12-19 12:54 PM


What a beautiful poem, ~


Greetings, and Welcome to Passions-We are glad you have decided to join our circle of friends, and family....


please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly

Greeneyes~

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7 posted 2003-12-19 01:38 PM


Looking forward to reading more of your poetry, Steve.  Welcome to Passions!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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8 posted 2003-12-19 02:06 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS STEVE!
Much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...    

iliana
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9 posted 2003-12-19 02:09 PM


Welcome, Steve.  I'm a newcomer, too.  Happy holiday!  
Suetang
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10 posted 2003-12-19 02:36 PM


Hello Steve

How wonderful for you to join us here at Passions.  I have no doubt you will enjoy your time here.  I loved your first post and look forward to reading many more.

Take care my friend

Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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Steve Motuel
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12 posted 2003-12-20 03:37 AM


Thank you everyone for your very warm welcome!

Steve

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