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In Blue of See
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In Blue of See |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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There is power in the silence that lies between the lines. I suffer so in want of know, dependent on the signs. The mirrored me romantically, reaches through the glass to find my way in what you say, entitled words en masse. I shade each letter, colored so, enriching what I read. Imagining the joyous ring, this season has decreed. Though all alone, I won't bemoan because a voice I've heard. A special gift that will uplift, in times of silent word. My holiday is dressed in blue, with moon and stars and sun. The phases of, the sky above when evening has begun. When all the lights are shining bright to witness me in smiles, you're here with me, in blue of see reflecting 'cross the miles. Eclipsed I am in thoughts of then, that echo come each night to settle in the quietness with dreams of you in sight. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"My holiday is dressed in blue, with moon and stars and sun. The phases of, the sky above when evening has begun. When all the lights are shining bright to witness me in smiles, you're here with me, in blue of see reflecting 'cross the miles." This is perfectly wonderful writing Maureen. Have a wonderful holiday! Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Positively sings! Love it! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M -- So many good things to say 'bout this one -- don't know where to start. Really lovely poem.  Jo |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
nice one M bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Maureen this is just beautiful. Another keeper for sure. hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - always did like your writings, this one is no exception... BC |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
M, such a beautiful beautiful write, this is one of my favorites by you! Excellent, a keeper for sure! happy holidays, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Enchantress, thank you for reading. My tree this year is of the sun, moon and stars and is dressed in blue, silver and gold and is my inspiration for this poem. I hope your holiday is filled with joy.  M Krawdad, always nice to read your responses. Thank you hugsss M iliana, thank you for your thoughts on my words. And welcome to passions, Jo *s M Hi there Bernie  good to see your name on hereChris, thank you for the "keeper" Love your signature hugsss M Bill, I hope this season finds you well and happy Amy, Happy Holidays to you, too and thank you for a sweet response. hugsss M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-22-2003 10:11 AM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"My holiday is dressed in blue, with moon and stars and sun. The phases of, the sky above when evening has begun. When all the lights are shining bright to witness me in smiles,. . . " Sounds to me as if mother earth has taken you to her heart, my friend, and and when Gaia hugs you tight the cold is held at bay. Hugs, jimmy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I as in a "dressed up mood" and the power of the Christmas Tree lights and decorations is very strong, despite whatever else I feel... Thank you Jimmy M |
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