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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-12-17 08:07 AM



A Strained Conversation

I had noticed the difference
It somehow seemed strange
Our chats used to be friendly
I wondered why the change

Seemed forced and shallow
It was lacking the natural flow
With a strained conversation
Was he wanting me to go

In abrupt one worded replies
What reasons could there be
Did feelings no longer matter
Or had he none left for me

Were his thoughts elsewhere
It became a puzzling situation
The back and forth small talk
Of our strained conversation

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2003-12-17 08:36 AM


oh Hope, I know that feeling to well.  Hope all is well hon, hugs.
HopeS
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2 posted 2003-12-17 09:17 AM


Thanks Donna for your caring reply ... I since had an audio message and email letter of explantion regarding the conversation .... so I do feel better now
Hope

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2003-12-17 09:52 AM


  so glad to hear it Hope, a nice lil' Christmas present wasn't it.  Hugs.
Aimster
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4 posted 2003-12-17 11:36 AM


lovely write, so glad to hear things
worked out too, so hard in friendships
and any relationship for that matter not
to know what is going on with the other
side.
Happy Holidays,
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-12-17 11:41 AM


Thank you Amy , yes his expanation did ease my mind and stopped me from worrying

Hope

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-12-17 12:47 PM


it happens....sad, but true
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