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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Nostalgic moments of another time Are filled with memories that once were mine. I see your eyes, your smile, your charm, To me you never caused no harm. Over the mountains, beyond these skies, The stars slowly fading from our eyes. The time soon passed and for reasons unknown, We drifted apart and we were left alone. I remember those times like yesterday. Memories of you fill my waking day. Although you are gone, feelings still last. My mind still floats back into the past. Throughout my mind you still weave. And reaching back I can retrieve Those times together now locked inside Where all my timeless memories hide. [This message has been edited by Eloise (11-23-2003 12:53 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
  It sounds like you're enjoying those nostalgic moments, Eloise. I agree, sometimes it is good to just sit back, relax, and enjoy a memory. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Memories can keep us warm when cold winds blow through our lives. This poem had a warm fuzzy feeling of familiarity for me.  EA |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Eloise, Beautiful Margot |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Midnite Sun, EA and Margot thank you all for stopping by and commenting. MS I guess I am in a nostalgic mood. It's always nice to sit back and reminisce. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eloise, this is a wonderful poem. Good memories are a wonderful thing to have.  Hugs Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to have good memories...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yes...I do know that place |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully written. Memories keep us company while waiting to live again fully the present moment. Love, Margherita  |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Ethel, James, passing shadows, Margherita thanks for your kind comments. Very nicely put Margherita, I agree. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed the read PoetFriendEloise... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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