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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-12-16 10:15 AM



In a world of gray
illusions -

You alone would stand
adorned.

And I would dream in color.


© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-12-16 10:19 AM


Ericc

You seem to have a talent for capturing an emotion with just a few words...this was beautiful!

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2 posted 2003-12-16 10:19 AM



Immediately, I saw
the alabaster
pinken...

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3 posted 2003-12-16 10:23 AM


so many colors ... such beauty in this....

Lauren~

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May the miracle of
Christmas touch your
life with special blessing

H A P P Y  H O L I D A Y S

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4 posted 2003-12-16 10:24 AM


My God, Eric...

This is simply incredible. Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

KoKo
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5 posted 2003-12-16 10:28 AM


Holy.....wow. This hit me hard. I'm glad I got to read this one
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6 posted 2003-12-16 10:28 AM


A colorful write! ~ and especially precious.


Linda

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7 posted 2003-12-16 10:31 AM


nice read
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8 posted 2003-12-16 10:32 AM


OUTSTANDING with such brevity so much has been said.  I adore this.

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

Kellie_Cantrell
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9 posted 2003-12-16 10:39 AM


Magnificent. Short, Sweet and to the point!
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10 posted 2003-12-16 11:28 AM


Beautiful Eric!!
Excellent!
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

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11 posted 2003-12-16 11:28 AM


Nice one, Eric.

Jason

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12 posted 2003-12-16 01:09 PM


stunning!
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13 posted 2003-12-16 02:57 PM


Eric,

I enjoyed this... Very nice.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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14 posted 2003-12-16 03:56 PM


wow, this is incredibly vivid and full

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

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15 posted 2003-12-16 04:08 PM


Splendid.
TD

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16 posted 2003-12-16 04:41 PM


love it ~~
inspired me:

Awake to You

In a world of gray
illusions -
You alone would stand
adorned.
And I would dream in color.


Awake to you each morn...

Eyes of blue, intense upon
translation lost on me.
You alone would stand
adorned
unwrapped for me to see.

The color of
true happiness,
a value in your touch.
You alone would stand
adorned
and share my love of such.
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-16-2003 04:54 PM).]

Kristabell
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17 posted 2003-12-16 06:38 PM


I liked this a lot. It was a great read. So short, yet so sweet. You got the point across very well!
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18 posted 2003-12-16 06:49 PM


so few words, so much emotion.  nice...
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19 posted 2003-12-16 07:10 PM


Awesome!

Iliana

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20 posted 2003-12-18 09:05 AM


I do dream in color....in fact, I'm doing it right now.

Thanks for getting it started!

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21 posted 2003-12-21 06:14 PM


You are the colors of love, infinite shades of beauty.
I love you. Margherita

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22 posted 2003-12-21 06:34 PM








(smiles) And may you always dream in technicolor with rainbows of love always being bows to your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is a poetic blessing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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23 posted 2003-12-21 06:49 PM


Such sweet, perfect, divine beauty in the most exquisite of expressions...

Wonderful... pure magic.

Aaaahhhhh...

I love you,
Moca

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