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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-16 10:22 AM


The cosmos
whispers
Your name…

Angels place
feather-soft kisses
on Your brow…

And I…
my Beloved?

I know
the Truth
of You.

I have seen
Your beauty
painted in
the sunsets.

I have felt
Your grace
in the softly
falling rain.

I have tasted
Your love
as Your fingers
trace the outline
of my lips.

Yes, my Beloved…

I know
the Truth
of You…

And I sacrifice
my self
to Your glory…

willingly…
joyously…
eternally.



This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (12-16-2003 10:44 AM).]

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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-12-16 10:27 AM


Wow Jc...!!

And you express this truth in such beautiful ways and words.

When we look with the eyes of the Beloved...we see only the Beloved.

Mirrors are wonderful things.


Love,
Eric

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
2 posted 2003-12-16 10:46 AM


Ah...dear One...

I'm getting really used to looking into those mirrors...and, knowing who is holding the "shiniest" one. Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-12-16 11:01 AM


I love your writing! It really resonates with my own soul!

Big, warm hug,
EA

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
4 posted 2003-12-16 11:24 AM


Beautiful...

Jason

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
5 posted 2003-12-16 11:54 AM


Oh, EA...you are just too nice!  I am so glad that you enjoy my writing so much. It comes from the very center of me...so, it's nice to know that I'm speaking someone's "language".  Thank you.

Jason...thank you for your comment. I do appreciate it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2003-12-16 12:57 PM


Wow! I love this! Sunsets and falling rain...you can see a lot in those, yes.

Well done jc

jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
7 posted 2003-12-16 11:54 PM


Thanks for the read, Dixie!

Sunsets and rain are two of my favorite things to write about...well, and all that "lovey" stuff!!!  Arghhhh!!  

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
8 posted 2003-12-21 04:28 PM


Dear jaicie, I'm happy that I have found this gem ... your soul sparkles and your words show it beautifully.

Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2003-12-21 05:45 PM


Lovely...James
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
10 posted 2003-12-21 06:56 PM


Ahhh, dearest Margherita...

I am so happy you found this as well...replies from you always sink joyfully into my soul...thank you.

James...thank you also for replying. I'm truly glad you liked it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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