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vandana
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0 posted 2003-12-16 09:59 AM



Still have to say goodbye
Still have you
In my heart
Don't want the night end
up with another broken heart
So I try to stay clam
And still have you
for every reason
And as every season
of a year
Still have your love
to share
Still have our song
All the love we share
Become only a moment
A moment to share
Still have
have the roses
You got for me
Still have your memory
Still the time so right
Don't let the night end
up with another song
of yesterday
Yesterday has gone
Far away
up above the sky
Still feel the pain
still feel the rain
Soon will
Falling dawn on me
Find myself once again
Alone
But still have you
No matter what



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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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1 posted 2003-12-16 10:01 AM


This is so poignantly soft and beautiful.

Eric

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-12-16 10:19 AM


Your heart is very generous, Vandana.
A gentle and VERY NICELY written piece.

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling
3 posted 2003-12-16 11:26 AM


A lovingly gentle write, enjoyed.

Jason

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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4 posted 2003-12-17 11:32 AM


beautiful...very beautiful!
take care,
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2003-12-17 11:36 AM


very beautiful...
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