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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-12-10 12:41 PM


no reason underneath  a feel

sum of treasonable taste of sense
resembling real flavor

to behave time blindfolded  
the eyes of lie

smile in a hand
visibly strangled to a breath

weight of a pill
ready to amass  
into avalanche of etherify  

and it’s differently same.

no
no reason  
but the streak of stripes evading blind.    


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Gaia
1 posted 2003-12-10 01:05 AM


"to behave time blindfolded  
the eyes of lie "


wish I'd written that one

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-12-10 03:24 AM


there is something I can't put my finger on about you Petre...but you're awesome even though I can't explain it
pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
3 posted 2003-12-10 03:42 AM


thank u, I don't know what it is , but hope it's good
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-12-10 03:12 PM


bump!
Toerag
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Ala bam a
5 posted 2003-12-10 04:03 PM


the different shades of pale or black"
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6 posted 2003-12-11 11:29 PM


Just when I think I get you, I have to ask myself if I can justify my thoughts and I wind up reading your poetry over and over and over again.

Keep up the good work. Please...

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-12-12 03:03 AM


oh yeah, it's good
James_A_Fraser
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8 posted 2003-12-12 08:43 PM


You keep throwing these ringers, we're going to run out of horses!



~~J

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9 posted 2003-12-12 08:43 PM


It's like pouring all the toys out of the box at once, and putting them together in new ways..... Barbie plays buzz-buzz football with the Hungry Hippos....beautiful stuff!
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