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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-12-12 07:30 AM


All that is owned reveals itself
Embracing charted shelves
Of which I am merely one tiny strand
Where a mind attaches itself,
Spiraling around the horizon
From the heart spews, a wide eastern sky
Stretching up and down the arms
Footing knee deep to the eye
Where men dream, half fallen away
Oh…how a pedigreed world replies
Bones on legs reaching higher places
Going for the magic wand
Air turning sapphire, starting to congeal with mist
All things are one, what shuffle transpires this?
What stands up like a full blown accusation?
The globe transpires our child indeed
The words, the material, the fingers of knowledge
Herbed circumstances finding lips
Place your thoughts in my hand
For those
Circles of great iron will be forged
I am a simple quotation of an actual reflection born
Participants in vocalizations, looking as a thing of wonder
Mingling cultures, powerful members,
Flourish wounds forgiven, but remembered
One of which integrity, mainstreams a vigorous nature
A visitor in this place, our salve eats all around all worries
Where visuals weaken the seeds of beasts
What ensues one, turns out another, roll your mindset east
Returning all seasons with essence
Attempting music, using only dry sticks
How profoundly humble, this leisurely smile, so profoundly classic
Where looks lay upon some giant hemlock eternal
Hastening our untimely subsist
Bonding the untrue heart, so that it may not eliminate another
For what happens to one happens to the other
Our empires refuse to slumber
A place, full blown with great level force
Striking stance and dancing, claming leather-bound journals
We keep the month of January, close to our hearts
As a reminder of winter quarters, fires warm and cabinets opened
Like freewill savages, with legs crossed over the other
We are barely hopeful enough to see
Through air thick with foggy dreams
Yet we pool by the hours while standing alone
We lay great white stars against the sky
Waiting for whatever the heavens might throw
Where the strong urge the weak to open their eyes
Bellowing, “Look out below!”
Drawing every imaginable manner, for Jonathon apples
Swaying them to tell their story
A great syrupy tale, of goat trading times
When disadvantages were circumstances
And dates were lonesome pines
Chill of morning, lay half filled with high puffy clouds
We read by the fire, finishing our braids of now
Finely woven “Midsummer Night’s Dreams”
Distant relations…beautiful day catching fairies
Where various possibilities, flourish our way
Make a wish..
Lay down flat palms, patting smooth holiday dough
Soft fluting crusts, gathering opulent circles
We are the rose…the thorns, the soil
Together pairing images, written on the porch of morning


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-12-12 08:08 AM


LeeJ,
We are the rose…the thorns, the soil
Together pairing images, written on the porch of morning

Excellent,
Bye the way I already tried that recipe. LOL

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
2 posted 2003-12-12 10:14 AM


Hi Lee J.
Guess I'll slip and slide over to your porch. After eating all those special cookies I can't see a thingah.........
Hap frid to youth.heehee...hic-cup. cuse me.
Loub Bon-Bon

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-12-12 10:28 AM


We are the rose…the thorns, the soil
Together pairing images, written on the porch of morning


A beautiful write, Lee.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Happy holidays,

Ethel


Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-12-12 11:54 AM


Nicely done
Nightshade
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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-12-12 12:33 PM


Chill of morning, lay half filled with high puffy clouds
We read by the fire, finishing our braids of now
Finely woven “Midsummer Night’s Dreams”
Distant relations…beautiful day catching fairies


Just wonderful Lee. Enjoyed. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-12-12 12:37 PM


"Finely woven “Midsummer Night’s Dreams”
Distant relations…beautiful day catching fairies
Where various possibilities, flourish our way
Make a wish..
Lay down flat palms, patting smooth holiday dough
Soft fluting crusts, gathering opulent circles
We are the rose…the thorns, the soil
Together pairing images, written on the porch of morning"

This is beautiful Lee...
I especially love the lines above.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me...   

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
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A Mountain Paradise
7 posted 2003-12-12 03:56 PM


I was drawn in my the title (although I would have read it no matter what as I really like the way you write) and was not disappointed.

A wonderful and fascinating write.

Hugs, Marti

'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.'  
PEACE!!!
Indira Gandhi

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
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8 posted 2003-12-12 08:46 PM


Long and smooth and peaceful and good. Like rowing across a quiet lagoon.



~~J

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