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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2003-12-05 12:11 PM


pain is your friend
the good doctor said
making his marks on my chart
funny I never did take it that way
unless I was wearing
mink-lined bracelets
and "somebody" kissed me first.

"vive'" I murmered shaking my head.
What's that you say, he inquired.

"vive' la difference..." under my breath.
I wrote them the check and expired.

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S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom
1 posted 2003-12-05 12:18 PM


well, they need to stay in bus-i-ness too, eh?
and I have yet to meet an md with an orchard.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-12-05 12:22 PM


Hey .  . I always wondered why I had so many friends K?
*smile*



glad your doin . . .
Much Love Lady
xxoo

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2003-12-05 12:23 PM


So? lessee? An apple a day times half a lifetime equals.........God, I hate math.

Hugs, M'witch

pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
4 posted 2003-12-05 12:31 PM


nice one. enjoyed
Temptress
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Mobile, AL
5 posted 2003-12-05 04:07 AM


not bumping...but KICKING this back to the top...
GeeeesssHHH! WHAT is it with the good poetry sinking to the bottom these days. I feel good poetry is in a nursing home.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2003-12-05 04:13 AM


I've never been kissed first...hehehe
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2003-12-07 10:39 PM


the difference is applesauce. . .and, I have a feeling that you know what I'm talking about. . .



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I am tired . . .

Christopher
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Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
8 posted 2003-12-08 02:47 PM


ok - when i stop laughing, i might see something 'serious' in this... naw, see it already, and i'm still laughing. does that mean you did something right???
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
9 posted 2003-12-08 04:15 PM


kicking with Jenn up there
*smile*

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