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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-12-01 07:28 AM


"Breathe deeply.
Feel the warmth of the sun
upon your cheeks."


"I can’t,"  she softly cries,
"my lungs are too weak
and my skin is stretched
too taut over my thin bones."

And with that,
the nurse sighs,
moves away slowly with downcast eyes
to the adjoining bed,
where another frail patient
breathes deeply
the final breath of life.

AIDS.

Too few aides to combat
AIDS,
partly because
too much of the world’s
financial aides
go for weapons.

Some day perhaps
we shall overcome...
our own
shortsightedness.


[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-01-2003 07:30 AM).]

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Duncan
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1 posted 2003-12-01 08:05 AM


"Some day perhaps
we shall overcome...
our own
shortsightedness."

Does make one question priorities.  Good Morning Kacy and Jiminy!!  

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-12-01 08:13 AM


Midnitesun
Perhaps, good write.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-12-01 09:04 AM




Very well said Kacy....thank you for this timely piece!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-12-01 09:10 AM


Dear Kacy, this hurts and ... you are so right!
Thank you.
Love, Margherita

NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2003-12-01 09:19 AM


Some day perhaps
we shall overcome...
our own
shortsightedness.


This is so beautiful. Thank you for your caring words.

This epidemic is totally out of control across our world and dollars and love are needed to eradicate it.

Hugs, Marti

'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.'  
PEACE!!!
Indira Gandhi

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6 posted 2003-12-01 09:36 AM


Thanks to each of you for taking amoment to read and reply to this post.
While I am not up on the actual stats, it's my understanding that over 40 million people on Earth are HIV positive, and the great majority are in countries too poor to offer everyone a vaccine and basic medical treatment.

What does one 'smart' missile cost? one plane? one gun?

one vaccine? one day's worth of clean water and food? one case of 'protection' ???

one life?



an interesting math link that says a great deal about 'priorities':
http://www.deltapartnership.org/math/missiles/img002.gif

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-01-2003 09:40 AM).]

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