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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-11-30 09:41 AM



I Look On The Brighter Side

Taking a few deep breaths
Positive I began  thinking
My heart refuses to break
It prevents me from sinking

In having shared my heart
I had done nothing wrong
Refusing to be weakened
I am aiming to keep strong

I shall always remain open
Through the thick and thin
I am refusing to be a loser
Keeping hopeful I shall win

Patience and persistance
I began restoring my pride
I refuse the negative views
I'll look on the brighter side

HopeĀ©2003

© Copyright 2003 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue ocean
1 posted 2003-11-30 10:14 AM


"What doesn't kill us, makes us stronger"

I like this !

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-11-30 12:44 PM


Thumbsup! I love this attitude! Very nice.
Love,
Terri~

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-30-2003 12:45 PM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-11-30 12:46 PM


definitely gonna print this one out and stick it on the fridge
Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
4 posted 2003-11-30 12:48 PM


great attitude to have..i liked it

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies.   Dimmu Borgir

vandana
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5 posted 2003-11-30 12:48 PM


enjoy your read
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2003-12-01 09:01 AM


That's wonderful dear Hope. And I am with you!
Love, Margherita

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