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tecoyah
Member

since 2003-11-16

Posts 83
NY

0 posted 2003-11-29 08:29 PM

Hatred

burnt soul ember
mental fire
broken passion
toasted eyre
lack of vision
crooked path
wasted mission
think I'll pass

Love

glowing passion
perfect heart
sentimental
work of art
goddess chosen
child of light
soul controller
share my life

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2003-11-29 11:15 PM

every rose has its thorn indeed....nice work

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir

WildPoet
Member

since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

2 posted 2003-11-29 11:32 PM

Nice work! Love to see what you can do without the constraints of not rhyming!

WildPoet

To earn respect, Give respect
To live life, nurture life
To enjoy Love, Share Love

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-29 11:33 PM

so true! very good!

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

4 posted 2003-11-29 11:45 PM

simply awesome, tecoyah...

Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-11-30 12:01 PM

Tecoyah~
Such lovely internal rhyming ... a beautiful penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

6 posted 2003-11-30 01:15 AM

feel

kindly,
redheart

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2003-11-30 01:24 AM

I like the contrast between the two....there really is a fine between love and hate....
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-11-30 08:42 AM

Somehow I tink I missed your first post and chance to welcome you. Anyway, welcome!
Enjoyed this look and love and hate, sometimes so close in how they impact the heart.

tecoyah
Member

since 2003-11-16

Posts 83
NY

9 posted 2003-11-30 06:14 PM

many thanx too all...did this as an exersize

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