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Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
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0 posted 2003-11-30 12:38 PM



I’ll be there

When no one is nice,
When no one cares,
About what you do,
I’ll be there.

When you’re feeling blue,
When nothing is going your way,
When you cannot face the day,
I’ll be by your side.

When you are feeling lonely,
When you cannot understand,
Why you feel that way,
I’ll be there to help you through.

When you are stressed,
When you do not feel your best,
When you need a friendly voice,
I’ll be there.

When you’re angry at this world,
And you think it is time for the end,
I will be there,
I am not going anywhere.


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-30 12:40 PM


a very comforting thought...it's a lucky friend you wrote this for
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2003-11-30 01:29 AM


Welcome to passions....I hope you enjoy your stay here....love this post...
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Kristabell
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3 posted 2003-11-30 01:51 AM


Thanks! I like it here! All of you guys are awesome!!!!
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4 posted 2003-11-30 02:20 PM


KristaBell~
My first read of your work ...
very nice, indeed~

Welcome to Passions~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-11-30 05:10 PM


Like passing shadow said--Lucky is the person that this is intended for. They have a jewel to treasure, there for the taking. Very nice to read!
Love,
Terri~

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2003-11-30 05:51 PM


Welcome to Passions!
A soothing write indeed.
ThisDiamond

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-11-30 05:53 PM


Kristabell
Welcome and a good post.

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