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Open Poetry #30

Sam, the Cricket

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

0 posted 2003-11-29 12:30 PM

His name is Sam,

The first detective cricket.

Just a quiet little guy

Trying to figure out who the hell

is making all that noise!

[This message has been edited by dingusjr (11-29-2003 12:31 AM).]

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2003-11-29 12:53 PM

Who's on first..no wait a minute how can he be there when who's on second?...interesting point of view from this short write.

Ratleader

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2 posted 2003-11-29 02:00 AM

Lar, ya make me laugh! Thank you!

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lil' Angel
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since 2003-11-14

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3 posted 2003-11-29 02:03 AM

Interesting point of veiw.

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-11-29 02:07 AM

hahaha I love it. Here lately there's been a croaker outside our patio door, too. We can't find him. Maybe I could ask the cricket detective to check it out for me.......this was sooooo cute! hehe

Love,
Terri~

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-29-2003 02:09 AM).]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

5 posted 2003-11-30 03:34 PM

Larry....loved this!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

6 posted 2003-12-01 09:57 AM

LOL... Thanks for these smiles... *S*

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