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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-11-26 03:27 PM



Pulse

at times
this world
leaves me
hopelessly lost
but no matter
where I am
you find me
hearing my
silent whispers
and echo
me home



© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-11-26 03:32 PM


"you find me
hearing my
silent whispers
and echo
me home"

Lovely Helen...much enjoyed.
Have a very blessed Thanksgiving.
Hugs~

~ Happy Thanksgiving America! ~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-11-26 05:09 PM


very sweet words, Helen.

I always enjoy reading your "heart"

hugs
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-26-2003 05:10 PM).]

alisa
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3 posted 2003-11-26 08:57 PM


very very nice....

i have missed your work...

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-11-27 10:37 AM


Wow...Helen!!!

Eric

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-11-28 11:12 AM


you find me
hearing my
silent whispers
and echo
me home


Beautiful, Helen, written from your heart.
Theanks for sharing it with us.
Hugs  
Ethel

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-11-28 12:35 PM


beautiful
Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
7 posted 2003-11-28 03:54 PM


Few poets here say so much with so few words, loved this.

Jason

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
8 posted 2003-11-29 12:26 PM


I've missed this...
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
9 posted 2003-11-29 04:08 AM


Amazing.!! Words I can never weave together, but in an instant they unfold in front of me. I am saving this to show to hubby. It's amazing how no matter what happens he keeps me secured, and not blown away at every wind that shakes me. My bodyguard. hehe. I loved this!!!!!!!
Love,
Terri~

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
10 posted 2003-11-30 11:28 PM


It's good to be able to read your work again, well done!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

C_ROK06
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since 2003-10-23
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11 posted 2003-11-30 11:33 PM


loved it... so much is conveyed with so little words... and the feeling it leaves me with is that of hope and reasurance that no matter how many times i become lost, that someone is always there to help us find our way back... at least... thats how i see it... haha. ^_^ but thanx. loved it.

"So let us then try to climb the mountain,not by stepping on what is below us,but to pull us up at what is above us,for my part at the stars"-MCE

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12 posted 2003-12-01 10:54 AM


Just lovely. *S*
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