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PazSqual
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0 posted 2003-11-17 03:53 PM



Changes

I sense a change of weather heading my way
I feel it in a piece of me that was broken before
I know I will not weather this storm well
But I will have to go through it once more
The chill in the air running through me
The silent emptiness filling my ears
The lonely nights with no one to hold
The warmth in me turning cold
So as the sun rises and sets each day
I will journey through life alone
Me feeling for no one
No one feeling for me


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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-11-17 03:59 PM


Let me be the first to welcome you to Passions!!!

And a very nice piece of poetry, I might add!



"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

[This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (11-17-2003 03:59 PM).]

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-11-17 03:59 PM


Welcome to Passions!
The friendliest poetry site on the Internet.
I'm sure you won't be lonely here for long!
Please check you email for a special greeting from all of us here.

Nancy.

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2003-11-17 04:00 PM


believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-11-17 04:08 PM



Welcome to Passions!  When I saw your username, I had a feeling there would be some good reading.  I wasn't disappointed.  Looking forward to more.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-11-17 04:35 PM


Welcome to Passions !
Enjoyed your first post.
Have fun here.
Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

PazSqual
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6 posted 2003-11-17 10:12 PM


Thank You for the Welcome, I'm sure I will like this place.
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-11-17 11:45 PM






(big hugggssssssss) We all send angel hugs your way, dearest friend, know that the seasons keep coming inevitably and the sun shall shine again so let yourself keep giving and you will be given in return, this is a very heartfelt debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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