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GG
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0 posted 2003-11-13 01:24 PM



I suppose that I
Should cease my expectations,
For cold words have rung within my ears for years.
And on the anniversary of birth for me
A day spent with my family,
The waitress is the one
Who treats me kind.
Yes I imagined nothing different,
From the ones who say they care.
I suppose it’s just the waitress
Since we paid her there.


- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (11-13-2003 02:10 PM).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2003-11-13 01:35 PM


awww, that is really terrible! I'm sorry....Happy Birthday sweetie!
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2 posted 2003-11-13 02:22 PM


Alyssa~
Well, Happy-Birth-Of-Day, sweetie~
This is very sad~  You are soooooo loved by so many of us~


Hope this little cake gives you a smile~
LOVE YOU~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-11-13 02:23 PM


well done!
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4 posted 2003-11-13 02:40 PM


Gawd! You always touch my heart
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5 posted 2003-11-13 05:57 PM


Sending a great big hug and kiss on your special day.Have many more and we all love you.
Should we all sing you a song?
Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday dear GG
Happy Birthday to you
And Many More..........  

Love Bon-Bon

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6 posted 2003-11-13 08:59 PM


A day always remembered,  though maybe not
said...A day when one small life came in on
angel wings...to always put a smile upon
our faces...even as she grows to be a young
lady...still as beautiful as ever...

Happy Birthday Allysa...may you have many
more...

GG
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7 posted 2003-11-15 04:00 PM


Sea,
thank you good to hear!!

Marge,
yes, it did give me a smile, thank you!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

GG
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8 posted 2003-11-15 04:00 PM


Brad,
thanks sir!

Dixie,
..and you always touch mine, thanks

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

GG
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9 posted 2003-11-15 04:03 PM


Bonnie,
awww I think you're the only one to sing to me actually! Thank you

Magnus,
beautiful, thank you And yes, I'm afraid I will always remember that day, which kind of scares me, for it was so sad...

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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