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SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

0 posted 2003-10-17 07:18 PM

Walked into a Rainbow

I walked into a rainbow on Thursday
  and came out on Monday
Didn't matter what week or month
  it's just that I was here

I heard my heart
  felt flutters in my stomache
sensed the chill of pending snow
  heard the sound of fallen leaves
crunch beneath my toes

The prism of color from where I came
  turned to muted greens and gold
Though not swift to move as such
  my hands were thin and cold

Monday looks for Thursday
  the rainbow starts from here
I'm not sure what week, what month,
  or even of the
year...

[This message has been edited by SimplyGold (10-19-2003 07:44 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-10-17 07:44 PM

Nicely done, enjoyed the imagery. Could
certainly feel the time of year...and
enjoyed the rainbow...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-17 07:50 PM

Where have you been? We've missed you. Welcome home...and thanks for the rainbow! I felt like I had entered the space and time of Brigadoon!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-10-17 09:52 PM

The rainbow is cyclical... and never-ending - Lovely verse, SimplyGold...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-10-18 01:59 PM

It is a beautiful day, and your poem
enhances it perfectly.

So nice to read you here again SG~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-10-18 02:03 PM

awesome imagery!

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

6 posted 2003-10-18 10:53 PM

Greetings to you all and thank you for the replies. I have been away much to long. The poetry on this site is truly a gift to me. I have missed reading and exchanging thoughts and ideas with each of you. Haven't been able to get here as much as I'd like. So thanks, for making me feel missed.

Hugs,
SG

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-10-19 04:56 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Electra, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful poetry always makes me smile and casts rainbows across the skies, yay! (kiss on cheek) I'm so happy you're back, we've all missed you so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-10-19 05:32 PM

enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2003-10-19 06:16 PM

Now that is SimplyGold.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2003-10-19 08:00 PM

SimplyGold~
It was a delight to see your name in the credits for today's posts~

This is lovely and welcome back my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

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