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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-10-18 07:31 PM





Clarification



Sunlight’s blinding beams
Petal’s illumination
Life, Roses, Rainbows



© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-18 07:34 PM


Beautiful!
Life, Roses, Rainbows.
How very very lovely Karilea...
Gosh I love that pic of you and the baby!
~hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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2 posted 2003-10-18 10:56 PM


This goes so well with BOTH pictures.

Like the sunshine, you are a ray of hope!

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3 posted 2003-10-18 11:54 PM


Such a beautiful picture you paint....your canvas is growing....this reminds me of warm summer days, and all the beauty it holds....
hugssss sunny lady...
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

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4 posted 2003-10-18 11:59 PM


This was a very beautiful write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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5 posted 2003-10-19 12:02 PM


if only we'd stop and see them more often
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6 posted 2003-10-19 12:44 PM


Beautiful, Karilea....the poem, picture of the roses, and
the picture of you and your sweet little grandbaby.
Hugs  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-10-19 10:26 AM


Yes, this is how it should be....

Thanx KJ for reminding us.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-19-2003 10:28 AM).]

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8 posted 2003-10-19 10:29 AM


And a rose seems almost crass, almost hard beside that beauty, doesn't it?

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9 posted 2003-10-19 10:47 AM


You've done it again...An uplift for a weary soul gift wrapped in a beautiful image of words.

Patricia

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10 posted 2003-10-19 12:07 PM


Damn good description of you kiddo!!


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Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

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11 posted 2003-10-19 03:09 PM


Your clarity is special and beautiful.I love roses, but peach roses are my favorite.
Crystal

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12 posted 2003-10-19 04:10 PM




(smiles) I too love both pictures soooooooo much, sweet friend, the simple things are what always give us clarity, and they are never difficult to find! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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13 posted 2003-10-19 07:59 PM


This is so beautiful. Roses are one of my favorite flowers.
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