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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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A murky grotto housed by hoary fears and sticky walls of red regret. Places where hurt resides go in and out with tides. Lightless recesses hold the eyes, sad eyes frozen for infinity. Without warning, they open, closing too slowly. Triggered senses send out feelers. Tentacles sing the sting of release. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A brain clump has never been described quite so eloquently...  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Corinne~ You write so well and with so much depth. I loved your poem and it loves me. Lightless recesses hold the eyes, sad eyes frozen for infinity. Without warning, they open, closing too slowly. Yea, that!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I just took over your migraine. Excellent, Corinne. But now I have to go lay down in the dark! |
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